Writing a fight scene?

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Re: Writing a fight scene?

Postby Rath Darkblade » Thu, 12 Dec 2019 10:58 am

¡Dios mio, that example is horrible. I couldn't read to the end of the first paragraph, let alone the whole thing. :)

That's not a fight scene, but a muddled mess. Randy has more patience than I do; I wouldn't try to fix it. I'd delete it and forget it.

But I agree with everything there, it makes a lot of sense. And I've created a few fight scenes before; they're not always easy, though.
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