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How to kill a word

Posted: Wed, 05 Jun 2019 6:16 pm
by Rkcapps

Re: How to kill a word

Posted: Wed, 05 Jun 2019 9:07 pm
by CageSage
This is one of the hardest things to learn to do well, but learn it we must.

becomes:

We must learn this.

Yes, learn how to excise words to make sharp pictures.

Re: How to kill a word

Posted: Wed, 05 Jun 2019 10:42 pm
by Rkcapps
Totally true :)

Re: How to kill a word

Posted: Thu, 06 Jun 2019 8:00 pm
by Drakenwood
Oh, I've taken the knife to some of my favourites lately, but what I've found is, once they're gone, rather than missing them, I feel better. Like throwing off a thick jacket when the sun comes out.